Fic: Redlined

[danceswithgary]

Title: Redlined
Author: danceswithgary
Pairing: Rodney McKay/John Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 1348
Archive: Fine, just let me know
Summary: No one spoke; no assurances, chants, or even threats, just a weighted silence that blanketed John until it all slipped away.

On AO3: https://archiveofourown.org/works/67727

Comments

[mashimero.livejournal.com]

You wrote fic based on my art? *is blown away*

I love how it's not really about the blowjob, it's the sensuality of it that comes across most. And Jesus, Ronon and Teyla painted like that... that's a mental image I might have to draw next!

Thanks for linking me! ♥

[londonsabre.livejournal.com]

GAWSH!

[blackchaps.livejournal.com]

Just. Guh.

[beadattitude.livejournal.com]

Gnah! Hunnngh. ::thud::

[melagan.livejournal.com]

I love the slow, sensual ease of this and how comfortable they are with each other-- and you still kept it a mystery.

Also- nnnggghhhhh

[lysambre.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is just the perfect addiction to a beautiful piece of art :)

[mezzo-cammin.livejournal.com]

You know what? I need a guh icon. Because words are just not sufficient to get the feeling across that reading this gave me.

The languid, sensuous awareness, and the ease they have with each other. No words. Not one. None were needed. You engaged all of our senses with this, and it was so wonderfully done!

Gorgeous!

And leaving the last of Rodney's come on his mouth, and having Rodney trace it with his thumb and put it in John's mouth? *flails* at the hotness of that!

I also loved the last little bit, with John protective of Rodney, and then seeing Ronon and Teyla at the gate...just perfect.

[outsideth3box.livejournal.com]

I love the smooth, slow, dreamlike pace of this, even the intense parts have a sleepy quality, kinda fuzzy at the edges. Very lovely.

[d_odyssey.livejournal.com]

Love the feel of this, the quiet, sensual tracing of lines, the taste, the drowsiness and especially the touching. Beautiful.

[helenkacan.livejournal.com]

... revealing exactly how far down the markings extended.

Okay, let me start with GUH. Because, knowing that Rodney's cock has also been painted (even though we didn't see it) is so ... inspiring?

And the way you wrote everything (as others have pointed out, sensual or dream-like) was exquisite.

John lifted his head in time to see Rodney smile with a contentment rarely seen in the other man.

This always makes me sigh in equal contentment, when Rodney can be still, sated and happy.

Mmmmmmm. What a lovely thing to read at the close of the day.

[dewey3067.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is beautiful. And such a dream-like quality with absolutely no words spoken. I could almost taste the spice.

[goddess47]

What a lovely story to go with the lovely picture..... You've done more than justice to the picture....

[gottalovev.livejournal.com]

I went to see the art and this is the perfect fic for it! awesome job!

[runpunkrun]

Great interpretation of mashimero's artwork! I like descriptions of the designs and the attention paid to taste in the blowjob; that really put an emphasis on the paint and the painted skin.