Fic: Unforgiven

[danceswithgary]

Title: Unforgiven
Author: danceswithgary (danceswithgary@yahoo.com)
Pairing: Clark/Lex
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Spoilers: Through Rage, then AU
Word Count: 8300
Archive: Fine, just let me know
Summary: Lex has been waiting years for his chance. It's time.

On AO3: https://archiveofourown.org/works/23759

Comments

[megamom2.livejournal.com]

Nice start! You've skillfuly drawn us in so we want to know more about what's brought them to this point and how the situation will play out, all while making your readers feel invested in the outcome. Looking forward to more!

[danceswithgary]

Thanks! It 's always good to know the first part is working to hook readers. :-D