Fic: Unforgiven

[danceswithgary]

Title: Unforgiven
Author: danceswithgary (danceswithgary@yahoo.com)
Pairing: Clark/Lex
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Spoilers: Through Rage, then AU
Word Count: 8300
Archive: Fine, just let me know
Summary: Lex has been waiting years for his chance. It's time.

On AO3: https://archiveofourown.org/works/23759

Comments

[hils.livejournal.com]

Interesting. Can't wait to see where this is going

[danceswithgary]

Your snippet spawned a bunny combined with the banner I'd created without a story. It's been swirling around in my brain all weekend and is still trying to gel beyond this.

[hils.livejournal.com]

OOH! My fic has never inspired anything before.

I've got an idea for a Rage-based fic myself but nothing to do with this *g* Mostly Clark angsting when Oliver shoots Lex

[dm-wyatt.livejournal.com]

*arches eyebrow in interest*

Intriguing start...

[danceswithgary]

I'm not sure I like it when stories take over like this - I hope it finishes itself, too. *rolls eyes at muse*

[talitha78.livejournal.com]

Ohhhh. I like this.

The once-proud figure rocked slowly, as shoulders rose and fell with heart-rending sobs.

Such a sad image!

[danceswithgary]

He is very sad. *pets the woobie* Thanks!

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Damn--that's a hell of a beginning! I hope you're posting more, soon!


*roxy be needing a scorecard for wips....* ;)

[danceswithgary]

I need one, too. Darn stories that won't wait their turn. *sighs* Thanks!

[kyanoswolf]

So sad a beginning! But full of so many possibilities.

It seems that Clark always goes back to that room in the mansion when he needs to try to find some answers from Lex. Even when Lex isn't there to provide them.

I look forward to more of this. Especially to learning what sent Clark to the mansion and what's in the box.

[danceswithgary]

There are so many things that could indeed happen and returning to where it all started may give tham both a second chance.

Thanks!

[me-ya-ri.livejournal.com]

Very interesting! I hope the plot bunnies cooperate with you so we get more of this. Poor Clark, destroyed by a note left behind so long ago.

[danceswithgary]

The alternate incarnation of your cover was poking at me for days, so hoepefully this one will pull together quickly now that I've posted like it insisted. :-D Thanks!

[sussixer.livejournal.com]

any chance Lex is going to go easy on a heart broken Clark?

Great start!

[danceswithgary]

Ummm, maybe? :-D

Thanks!

[hoperoy.livejournal.com]

Okay, you've got me hooked. More, please?

[danceswithgary]

I'm definitely working on it. :-D Thanks!

[myownghost.livejournal.com]

i'll be interested in watching how you develop this, especially since you've told us you don't have it entirely figured out yet. intriguing!

[danceswithgary]

I have the basics, it's filling it in that will take a little time. :-D Thanks!

[megamom2.livejournal.com]

Nice start! You've skillfuly drawn us in so we want to know more about what's brought them to this point and how the situation will play out, all while making your readers feel invested in the outcome. Looking forward to more!

[danceswithgary]

Thanks! It 's always good to know the first part is working to hook readers. :-D

[jakrar.livejournal.com]

Awesome start! I look forward to seeing where this goes.

[danceswithgary]

Hopefully it will go to an angsty little drama with sex and redemption. *grin*

Thanks!

[rosy5000.livejournal.com]

Ooo! Very intersting start. :) Love all the details of Clark exploring the library. :D

[danceswithgary]

Reconnecting with an important part of his past...and hopefully his future. :-D Thanks!

[yavannauk.livejournal.com]

Oooh, this is a most intriguing start. (Yes, I am behind on reading still being here in the States on holiday! *g*)

[danceswithgary]

Thanks, I hope you enjoy the rest. (and your holiday over here)