danceswithgary: (CLex - Kiss Me)
danceswithgary ([personal profile] danceswithgary) wrote2008-02-22 03:31 pm
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Fic: The Next Time (CLFF24 Entry)

Title: The Next Time
Author: danceswithgary (danceswithgary@yahoo.com)
Pairing: Clark/Lex
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 470
Archive: Fine, just let me know
Summary: "The two of you just wanted to keep me at home, barefoot and pregnant."

On AO3: https://archiveofourown.org/works/23848
kyanoswolf: (Clark is pregnant)

[personal profile] kyanoswolf 2008-02-22 08:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh. My. God. Do you know how hard it is not to cackle with laughter while at work when reading this? I'm turning violent shades of purple!

Somehow I think that Lex and the AI will have little trouble outwitting Clark.

[identity profile] aloneindarknes7.livejournal.com 2008-02-22 08:49 pm (UTC)(link)
That was so funny! I adored all of it so much! Oh Clark, darn that Luthor for wanting you barefoot and pregnant. That last comment though, will keep Lex up for the next ten years!

[identity profile] carolandtom.livejournal.com 2008-02-22 09:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I admit I like fics with pregnant!Clark. I've enjoyed re-reading this one. It's a funny and cute story. I hope you write pregnant!Clark again, please!

[identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com 2008-02-22 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahahahahaaaa!

Every single line is laugh out loud great!

[identity profile] kira29.livejournal.com 2008-02-22 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! Cute story.

I have a question though, are they going to be posting all the stories to a main website again??

[identity profile] gawy-lavall.livejournal.com 2008-02-22 09:28 pm (UTC)(link)
*LOL* The idea of Lex and the AI plotting together and the consequence being a pregnant Clark... *ROTFL* Patronising Lex and Snarky Clark make me happy :D Thanks!

[identity profile] ellyfanfiction.livejournal.com 2008-02-22 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Cute, very cute. Funny as all heck, too. I love dialogue-only stories, and you did it very well:-).

[identity profile] megamom2.livejournal.com 2008-02-22 10:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved this! Petulant Clark and patient Lex shown with great pacing and humor. Great to come home and enjoy after a work day from Hell!

[identity profile] me-ya-ri.livejournal.com 2008-02-22 11:02 pm (UTC)(link)
*Giggles madly* This was wonderful! I so want to see that diagram, all perfectly detailed about there. *Snickers* Wonderful work! XD

Just one question: where is this CLFF? I've seen it mentioned a few times but have no idea where it is.
ext_29545: by [info]keeraa (Default)

[identity profile] opusnone.livejournal.com 2008-02-22 11:11 pm (UTC)(link)
absolutely adored this story at CLFF. great, great job!

[identity profile] lihope.livejournal.com 2008-02-22 11:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Lex you better watch out for clark. He is waiting. both of them are so adorable and cute! I love preg clark!
Good job!

[identity profile] chinae.livejournal.com 2008-02-23 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
This is great. Where are the other clarklex fest stories located? I know usually they put them up on a webpage.
ext_21608: (azula smiles)

[identity profile] roguebitch.livejournal.com 2008-02-23 01:31 am (UTC)(link)

What, no pickles?

Hahahaha, brilliance. I enjoyed!

[identity profile] rosy5000.livejournal.com 2008-02-23 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
This is one of the most adorable mpregs! *giggles* Had me laughing both times I read it. :D

My favorite line was: "Like I'm going to let you get anywhere near me with that thing. It's loaded, and obviously not with blanks."

hehehe Poor Clark.

[identity profile] zephyr-macabee.livejournal.com 2008-02-23 02:49 am (UTC)(link)
So true, spandex is the great revealer. I sympathize with poor pregnant Clark.

[identity profile] angel2177.livejournal.com 2008-02-23 06:47 am (UTC)(link)
love this fic lol

[identity profile] mama-terra.livejournal.com 2008-02-23 01:40 pm (UTC)(link)
*grin* Poor Clark. :D

[identity profile] peach1250.livejournal.com 2008-02-23 05:43 pm (UTC)(link)
So cute... :-)

[identity profile] morganichele.livejournal.com 2008-02-23 06:03 pm (UTC)(link)
I LOVE this so much! SO much! *giggles* I can't stop smiling.

[identity profile] tasabian.livejournal.com 2008-02-23 07:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Bitchy!preggers!Clark is hilarious! *pets him*

[identity profile] helioshyperion.livejournal.com 2008-02-23 07:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my gosh, this is the cutest thing I've ever read. It's superb and perfect and the best thing to read first thing on a Saturday.

[identity profile] touchstoneaf.livejournal.com 2008-02-23 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)
HEE!!!
oh! trapped in giggles!!!
i'm not sure at what point i tilted over the edge into actual giggle-land (though i know it was very early on)...but i know exactly when i toppled over into 'laughing-silently-and-slightly-in-pain-but-in-a-good-way'. right HERE:

>>"Like I'm going to let you get anywhere near me with that thing.>>

that THING! *snorts off into cackles again*
poor boys. poor Lex, not getting any, poor Clark for feeling how we all feel at some point. Just... *trails off snorting again*

oh, i love your dialogue-only fics. So few can pull it off; but you? you have a gift.

[identity profile] jakrar.livejournal.com 2008-02-24 04:27 am (UTC)(link)
This makes me grin every time I reread it. *snorfles*

[identity profile] matryoshkarose.livejournal.com 2008-02-26 05:20 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! Very cute. I have a deep and abiding fondness for crabby pregnant Clark.

[identity profile] amberporce.livejournal.com 2008-02-27 09:21 am (UTC)(link)
Clark hold grudges against Lex in this case was unbelievably adorable!

"You may want to learn how to sleep with one eye open. The next time, it's going to be you."
I couldn't help but imagine when it comes to Lex's turn.*g*

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