Fic: Redlined

[danceswithgary]

Title: Redlined
Author: danceswithgary
Pairing: Rodney McKay/John Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 1348
Archive: Fine, just let me know
Summary: No one spoke; no assurances, chants, or even threats, just a weighted silence that blanketed John until it all slipped away.

On AO3: https://archiveofourown.org/works/67727

Comments

[mashimero.livejournal.com]

You wrote fic based on my art? *is blown away*

I love how it's not really about the blowjob, it's the sensuality of it that comes across most. And Jesus, Ronon and Teyla painted like that... that's a mental image I might have to draw next!

Thanks for linking me! ♥

[helenkacan.livejournal.com]

... a mental image you might have to draw next?????

Oh, please do.
And, perhaps (if you are so inclined), it could even be OT4.

[mashimero.livejournal.com]

It's not OT4, but I did do a Teyla/Ronon pic, here (http://mashimero.livejournal.com/92639.html) if you're interested.

[danceswithgary]

I'm so glad you liked it! I love when an image grabs me hard enough that I can pour out a story in a few hours. Thanks for sharing it. :-D

[mashimero.livejournal.com]

Your fic inspired me to do more art! It's over here (http://mashimero.livejournal.com/92639.html) if you want to see it.

[londonsabre.livejournal.com]

GAWSH!

[danceswithgary]

Thanks! :-D

[blackchaps.livejournal.com]

Just. Guh.

[danceswithgary]

Thanks! *twirls*

[beadattitude.livejournal.com]

Gnah! Hunnngh. ::thud::

[danceswithgary]

My mission here is complete. :-D

Thanks!

[melagan.livejournal.com]

I love the slow, sensual ease of this and how comfortable they are with each other-- and you still kept it a mystery.

Also- nnnggghhhhh

[danceswithgary]

Thanks for providing the prompt that produced the image (and story)! I love when an image and/or prompt grabs me hard enough that I can pour out a story in a few hours. :-D

[lysambre.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is just the perfect addiction to a beautiful piece of art :)

[danceswithgary]

Thanks so much! :-D

[mezzo-cammin.livejournal.com]

You know what? I need a guh icon. Because words are just not sufficient to get the feeling across that reading this gave me.

The languid, sensuous awareness, and the ease they have with each other. No words. Not one. None were needed. You engaged all of our senses with this, and it was so wonderfully done!

Gorgeous!

And leaving the last of Rodney's come on his mouth, and having Rodney trace it with his thumb and put it in John's mouth? *flails* at the hotness of that!

I also loved the last little bit, with John protective of Rodney, and then seeing Ronon and Teyla at the gate...just perfect.

[danceswithgary]

I thought the prompt was interesting, but the image sparked the story. I wanted to keep the team's experience a complete mystery from beginning to end and the silence was key. No words got in the way of John and Rodney's connection, whether it was their first time or the hundredth. The mysterious drug helped rather than hindered. Glad you liked it and thanks! :-D

[outsideth3box.livejournal.com]

I love the smooth, slow, dreamlike pace of this, even the intense parts have a sleepy quality, kinda fuzzy at the edges. Very lovely.

[danceswithgary]

I'm glad you enjoyed! Thanks!

[d_odyssey.livejournal.com]

Love the feel of this, the quiet, sensual tracing of lines, the taste, the drowsiness and especially the touching. Beautiful.

[danceswithgary]

The artwork was wonderfully inspirational. :-D Thanks!

[helenkacan.livejournal.com]

... revealing exactly how far down the markings extended.

Okay, let me start with GUH. Because, knowing that Rodney's cock has also been painted (even though we didn't see it) is so ... inspiring?

And the way you wrote everything (as others have pointed out, sensual or dream-like) was exquisite.

John lifted his head in time to see Rodney smile with a contentment rarely seen in the other man.

This always makes me sigh in equal contentment, when Rodney can be still, sated and happy.

Mmmmmmm. What a lovely thing to read at the close of the day.

[danceswithgary]

The artwork really inspired me - I love when the words just pour out in response and I just need to capture them to finish in a few hours. Mystery was the perfect prompt to play with. Glad you liked it and thanks!

[dewey3067.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is beautiful. And such a dream-like quality with absolutely no words spoken. I could almost taste the spice.

[danceswithgary]

I'm so glad you liked the flavor of the day. :-D Thanks!

[goddess47]

What a lovely story to go with the lovely picture..... You've done more than justice to the picture....

[danceswithgary]

Thanks so much, I'd glad you liked it! :-D

[gottalovev.livejournal.com]

I went to see the art and this is the perfect fic for it! awesome job!

[danceswithgary]

Thanks - it's great when the image sparks the words. :-D

[runpunkrun]

Great interpretation of mashimero's artwork! I like descriptions of the designs and the attention paid to taste in the blowjob; that really put an emphasis on the paint and the painted skin.

[danceswithgary]

Thanks so much! The artwork provided such wonderful detail to work with that I couldn't resist. :-D