Date: 2007-06-04 01:39 am (UTC)
danceswithgary: (Default)
Thanks for the encouragement.

No, the next paragraph is still Lex, the break turns to Clark's POV, if I'm reading your question correctly. Perhaps it's confusing because they're not hearing the quoted lines, they're speaking them.


LEX
I'm speechless in his presence because he has always been the strong one, until now, my personal savior. Now, I finally have a chance to repay him, and I don't know how this is supposed to work, but I have to try.

"I don't know where to start, Clark."

His head turns, he looks toward me and he smiles, and I'm sure that his eyes are smiling too, behind those dark glasses. I'm sure because that's how Clark is, always giving to others, despite his own pain.

. . .

CLARK
He was always the strong one, the one who always knew what to do, how to solve the problems I brought to him, my personal savior. When he needed me the most, when I might have made up for the other times I failed and hurt him in the past, I failed again and he is still paying the price for my cowardice.


Did I misunderstand? I appreciate you taking the time to feedback tlike this. :-D
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