Date: 2007-12-02 05:34 am (UTC)
>>"All you've ever wanted was my secrets, Lex. You could have had so much more. Now you only have your pieces of me. I hope they'll be enough.">>

oh, CRY!!!
NO, Clark; the secrets were just the SYMBOLS! he wanted you and couldn't HAVE you and this was all he had to hang ON to to feel CONNECTED to you, you elusive little wraith! *headdesk*
god, some ppl just DON'T get that!!!

>>Lex looked around at his trophies, his face contorted with self-loathing. ...shouting, few words comprehensible between gasps and cries of gut-wrenching anguish>>

okay, this entire scene blew me away. SO very VISCERAL and REAL! a masterwork!

>>Lex ignored the cuts he received from flying glass as well as the blood that made his makeshift weapon slippery in his grip, the splintered ends gouging the tender skin of his palms.>>

GOD, i love it when Lex's crippled love makes him self-destructive.
it shouldn't be so toe-curlingly goddamn sexy, should it? *feels guilty for...oh, about a half a second...then goes right back with popcorn*

>>All he could see was a red haze of destruction, never realizing the flickering was due to rising flames>>

oh, and Clark's angry, and gone, and...i've had nightmares for Lex that started out this way. *starts cursing inchoherently herself*

>>someone seized him from behind, disarming him with ease. Furious at the interruption, he kicked and flailed against an immovable presence, his hoarse shouts incoherent>>

seriously, you have NO idea how tangible my relief is here. i should have known nothing would...
i am so caught up in this. as always, with your fics.

>>Please stop fighting me, Lex>>

and yourself...

>>I thought I'd lost you.>>

you are aware how very much you make me sniffle, i hope? that line sums up SO damn much...

>>Lex thought the kiss to the side of his head was a hallucination brought on by lack of oxygen, but the low, distressed voice informed him otherwise>>

i swoon. yes, i do...

>>"I thought you had, too. My brain declared our friendship was over, but somehow forgot to tell my heart to stop loving you." Another nuzzling kiss sent a shudder of relief through Lex's body>>

i swoon harder and look for chocolate.

>>Looks like I missed a hell of a coming-out party...>>

wait for it...

>>for the newest Incredible Hulk.>>

CRASH!

>>His forehead dropped to Clark's shoulder as shouts and pounding feet began to approach along the hallway>>

their body language kills me. i mean, seriously; they TALK 'friends'...and their bodies say 'wannabe lovers'. *smacks them silly for being noobs*

>>he flashed a pleading look at Clark and whispered, "Please don't leave me.">>

see? again, swooning.
you just KILL me!!!
this is one of your most powerful scenes ever, just so you know.

>>He wasn't sure his heart and mind could take losing Clark twice in one night>>

you and me both, babe. *wants to help cuddle Lex*
what IS it with that guy that gets us all...desperate to HELP him?!
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