Fic: One Door Closes

[danceswithgary]

Title: One Door Closes
Author: danceswithgary (danceswithgary@yahoo.com)
Pairing: Clark/Lex
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 1418
Archive: Fine, just let me know
Summary: In Lex's darkness, he still finds light.

AO3: https://archiveofourown.org/works/23089

Comments

[touchstoneaf.livejournal.com]

wow.
just...wow.
didn't even get it till the end (duh!)...you wove it all in so beautifully and always write their awareness of one another as such a full-senses-driven sort of awareness that i didn't even NOTICE that there were no descriptions of sight except in the dream, till the end. I mean, even the bit about not turning the light on to go to the bathroom could be interpreted any number of ways.

bravo!

[danceswithgary]

I was insane and picked up four prompts for the challenge (the original posts and feedback are at absolut_lex) and I liked the idea of trying to make it a sort of 'The Sixth Sense' effect. Glad it worked. Thanks!

[northernwalker]

I didn't guess where this was going until the end. Beautifully done.

[danceswithgary]

It's always good to hear when something works. :-D

Thanks so much!