danceswithgary: (CLex - Kiss Me)
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Title: Cordially Yours
Author: danceswithgary (danceswithgary@yahoo.com)
Pairing: Clark/Lex
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: PWP rife with possibilities. Chocolate could end up anywhere (and probably will).
Spoilers: S1-S2, if you really go searching
Word Count: 4800
Archive: Fine, just let me know
Summary: Almost everyone enjoys a little chocolate on Valentine's Day...some people just enjoy it a little bit more.

On AO3: https://archiveofourown.org/works/15713
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Date: 2008-02-14 04:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amcnh.livejournal.com
I was totally looking forward to this post after I read your snippit from your previous post. And it was definitely worth it. RedK to the rescue and a nice way to tie in how Clark's mood is how the situation will go.
Definitely made me envious...sex and chocolate, is there really anything better? *sigh*

Date: 2008-02-14 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myownghost.livejournal.com
and so fitting that lana made the candy! what a happy valentine. :)

Date: 2008-02-15 01:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lapetite-kiki.livejournal.com
The manip is great! But a sixteen years old Clark, under red K, first time story isn’t something that I enjoy much.

Date: 2008-02-15 01:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lapetite-kiki.livejournal.com
I think that even at eighteen I wouldn’t have enjoyed it, it’s the combination of being on red K and the fact that it was their first time that I didn’t like. And that it’s a short one shot story. I would have needed more before and after story to make sense of the main event. Btw, even if it doesn’t change anything for me, I think that if you followed SV timeline, Clark should be seventeen in you story, no?

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Date: 2008-02-15 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aloneindarknes7.livejournal.com
This was so insanely hot! The cherry part at the beginning then that chocolate part, with Lex and the rimming, was pure genius! You are so wonderful!

Date: 2008-02-16 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selinamoonfire.livejournal.com
Oooh...very hot! Mm...chocolate and Clex. Yum! Though I admit, I started giggling over this.

Clark growled in frustration, "A: No one has any idea how old I am, Lex. B: They made up a day and year and I do not look like I'm only sixteen. Z: I'm an alien! Human laws don't apply to me, if you really think about it."

"Z?"

Clark snickered. "I was trying to make sure you were paying attention."


I love, love, love, that bit. I know, I'm weird. ;)

Date: 2008-02-16 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nerowill.livejournal.com
This is the best use I've ever seen for Red!K. :) Very, very hot. I love the way Lex is so concerned about taking advantage of Clark. *hugs*

Date: 2008-02-16 06:47 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] capnzebbie.livejournal.com
This was excellent! I loved it!

Date: 2008-02-16 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tasabian.livejournal.com
Mmmmm....nothing better for Valentine's Day than sticky-with-chocolate boys getting naked with each other! Love this bit:

If Clark hadn't been holding him up so firmly, Lex would have melted into the bed, just like the chocolate Clark was so diligently cleaning up.

I hear ya, Lex! And I loved Lex's short-lived attempt at playing hard to get:
"I'm perfectly capable of taking off my own clothes, Clark."

Hee! But what fun would that be?

Date: 2008-02-16 10:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ellyfanfiction.livejournal.com
Sweet and romantic and awesome. Thank you for posting!

Date: 2008-02-19 08:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberporce.livejournal.com
Chocolate-covered red K cherries! I bet they were definitely satiated. The story was irresistible! I’m sure I’ve never seen something like ‘chocolate rimming’ before. *g*
I tried to think of Lana’s reactions when she knew that her chocolates all disappeared, also the boys. She might have no clue what happened at all.

Date: 2010-01-16 10:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unbreakableburr.livejournal.com
This was sensual as all hell, yum.

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Date: 2010-02-14 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oliver95.livejournal.com
Amazing, something of yours I haven't read, and really erotic, too. On a first reading I didn't spot whether it was the red meteors or Clark pretending, whatever it was it's a great story.
I think when they try the nuts they'll decide that they need to shave them first otherwise the chocolate may not stick long enough to be licked off.
What a naughty boy he was to offer Lex his cherry before the red flash in his eye; there's more to Clark than yes Mom, no Dad. Thanks for outing it!
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