Fic: Decoded

[danceswithgary]

Title: Decoded
Author: danceswithgary
Pairing: Rodney McKay/John Sheppard
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 427
Archive: Fine, just let me know
Summary: As requested, a little add-on to melagan's Dogtags.

On AO3: https://archiveofourown.org/works/24427

Comments

[outsideth3box.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you didn't resist!

So sweet and touching.

[danceswithgary]

It was those eyelashes (and my own dogtag kink). Glad you liked where I took it. Thanks!

[ribbon-purple.livejournal.com]

I love this!

[danceswithgary]

Thanks so much! *twirls*

[diva0789.livejournal.com]

amazing....i love stories with loving posession....very well done.

[danceswithgary]

I love it when what they both need meshes. Glad you enjoyed and thanks! :-D

[delphia2000.livejournal.com]

Ummmmmmm! Perfect!

[danceswithgary]

So glad you liked it! Thanks!

[tex.livejournal.com]

Yowee, that's hot. \o/

[danceswithgary]

I had great inspiration. And eyelashes. :-D Thanks!

[djaddict.livejournal.com]

I love marking fic!!!

Beautiful!

[danceswithgary]

There's just something about that, isn't there? Thanks!

[mezzo-cammin.livejournal.com]

Oh, my, that is hot in so many ways. 'John's need causing him to be less careful', and this...

'and he licks his lower lip and dips his head to set his teeth in the soft curve between Rodney's neck and shoulder, a warning not to move'

...just hit a kink I wasn't even sure I had.

Niiiiiice job! :o)

[danceswithgary]

I did have some great inspiration. Glad I could add to the list of kinks (mmmm, necks and almost biting). *grin*

Thanks!

[antares04a.livejournal.com]

Lovely and hot sequel. And it is good that they both have a dogtags kink. *g*

[danceswithgary]

I think it's perfect when they both get what they need. Thanks! :-D

[timespirt.livejournal.com]

Ha,

Now it just needs a wee picture to denote it and all will be complete!

[danceswithgary]

Actually, I did try to come up with something for that, but had to resort to words.

*sigh*

*resolves to spend time looking for more pretties to play with*

Thanks!

[fenchurch1.livejournal.com]

Ohh possessive!John marking Rodney - shiver! One of my favourite kinks! Feel free to write more in that vein!! Thank you!

[danceswithgary]

It makes me shiver, too. When I read the original, I had to run with it. :-D Thanks!

[helenkacan.livejournal.com]

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm--

What? You expect me to be articulate?
::sighs dramatically::
Okay, I'll do my best.

There is something SO satisfying about reading about marking when it's not permanent, because then it just has to be done over and over. Oops, I feel another mmmmmm threatening to escape. I get a little shiver when Rodney acknowledges "the carefully applied imprint, the pale blush lettering the clearest Rodney's ever seen on his skin". Once again, marking, but done so sensually and delicately.

::smacks forehead::
As if I didn't have enough kinks(!?!), you had to go and give me dog-tag impression kink!

YAY, YOU!

[danceswithgary]

Expect articulate? Nah. But it's great when I get it. *grin*

That impermanent, not really painful, marking really does it for me, although tattoos also have a special place in my...uh...heart.

Thanks so much for letting me know I've added to your list! :-D

[tarlanx]

Lovely addition :)

[danceswithgary]

Thanks so much! :-D

[melagan.livejournal.com]

Dear mother of GUH that's hot

Thank you, thank you, what a perfect place to take this!

[danceswithgary]

Take a bow - you inspired it! :-D Glad you liked my addition and thanks for letting me play!

[tygtig.livejournal.com]

I loved dogtags and I love this ::grin::

[danceswithgary]

There's just something about them. *nods* Thanks!

[trobadora]

Mmmmm. *fans self*

[danceswithgary]

Thanks! *fans you from other side*

[sarcarmic.livejournal.com]

So um... really? The batting of eyelashes, that works? *bats eyelashes furiously* ;)
This is seriously hot, thanks for sharing!

[danceswithgary]

Well, sometimes it works if accompanied by a request. *grin* Glad you enjoyed the result of melagan's batting and inspiring fic. Thanks!

[nodakgirl.livejournal.com]

This was quietly hot!! I'm not sure what that means but I felt the deep deep connection between them. They do belong together and the marking is an outward showing of that...and one they both want. It's cold and snowy in Nodak so this warmed me nicely. Thank you.

[danceswithgary]

Quietly hot is a lovely way to put it, especially if it warmed you up. Thanks so much for letting me know you liked it! :-D

[clwilson2006.livejournal.com]

Wow.
I'm supposed to be writing, I have the whole day to myself and I'm being distracted by fantastic fic, which this is. I wish I could write like this. I so envy your talent.

[danceswithgary]

Thanks so much for the lovely compliment. Now, shoo! Go write! :-D

[lazy-8s.livejournal.com]

You know this might just be the most sensual scene that I have read in quite awhile, and there was no sex involved!!! I loved it.

[danceswithgary]

Thanks for the lovely compliment - I love playing with scenes like this and it's great to know when it works. :-D

[azureavian.livejournal.com]

I'm gonna agree with helenkacan, marking kink, yup yup.

This was lovely.

[danceswithgary]

It's definitely up there for me. *nods* Thanks for letting me know you liked it! :-D

[wanted-a-pony.livejournal.com]

Buddha on a biscuit this is great! Somehow you managed to condense so many details & touches I just looove into so few words: soft silent evidence of passion, John watching Rodney watching in the mirror, John holding Rodney still with a bite, slow intentional marking, eyelashes & hand-covering-hand, "Yours" in a whisper....

:: sigh :: Oh baby! I hope melagan bats her eyelashes at you again soon. ;-D

[danceswithgary]

Her fic was the best kind of inspiration, gave me a chance to play with some of my favorites. Glad you enjoyed and thanks! :-D

[sterlingirl.livejournal.com]

Niiice. :D I've got a thing for dogtags too.

[danceswithgary]

There's just something about them. *nods* Thanks!

[beadattitude.livejournal.com]

Yours.

Oh. OH. Perfect.

And I have to say, the image of John Sheppard slouching in the doorway looking like that gave me a full body flush. MMmm.

[danceswithgary]

I'd definitely have an attack of wobbly legs if I looked in a mirror and saw that. *nods* Glad you enjoyed and thanks!

Decoded

[iadorespike]

Um...yeah, that totally works for me.

♥

Thanks so much!

Re: Decoded

[danceswithgary]

*tickles cute kitty's tummy*

I'm so glad it worked for you. *twirls* Thanks!

[savingfaith333.livejournal.com]

Oh, this was simply gorgeous darling! Utterly and completely! *sighs wistfully*

[danceswithgary]

Thanks so much for letting me know you enjoyed it! *twirls in delight*