Fic + Art: Model Behavior

[danceswithgary]

Title: Model Behavior
Author: danceswithgary
Pairing: Rodney McKay/John Sheppard
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 1500
Archive: Fine, just let me know
Summary: "That's funny. I always thought not wearing any clothes meant you were nude." Set in the Screen Savor 'verse, but may be read as standalone.

On AO3: https://archiveofourown.org/works/24512

Comments

[alia-eternal.livejournal.com]

oh my lord but that was hot! nom nom nom :D
And I love your icon, now I really want to read the rest of this series. :)

[danceswithgary]

Thanks and I hope you enjoy the others, too! :-D

[earwensilimaure.livejournal.com]

I love fics where they tak epictures. :3 Very hot!

Btw, I don't mean to insult but it's not 'le revolution' but 'la revolution'. ;)

[danceswithgary]

Thanks, glad you liked it. Not insulted, but I deliberately used 'le' instead of 'la' and then had Rodney chide John's accent. Perhaps I should have just had him tell John his French was atrocious, but c'est la vie.

Actually, I've corrected it. :-)

[tarlanx]

So sweet and slow and warm :)

[danceswithgary]

Thanks - I'm glad you enjoyed them taking the time to play for a little while. :-D

[veritas-st.livejournal.com]

Sometimes you turn your head a certain way or raise your arm, bend your knee or elbow and I see a line, a shadow, a curve that's perfect for just an instant and I want to keep it for myself. Oh God ME TOO Rodney. *sighs*

God this is HOT. But tender at the same time.

Stunning

[danceswithgary]

I'm glad you enjoyed something a little slower - I loved writing it. Thanks! :-D

[antares04a.livejournal.com]

That was a hot way to take photos - and the way you describe the light in the room and on John's body is great.

[danceswithgary]

Thanks - glad you liked the photo session! :-D

[d_odyssey.livejournal.com]

That was so sultry and hot. I love Rodney surreptitiously taking pictures while playing music, relaxing John. Adore the explanation that he wanted the lines and shadows for himself. So hot and then you add the humor - perfect! Hee, "harshing my mellow." Boys! Also, another great match up of story to picture.

[danceswithgary]

I really enjoyed visualizing this as I wrote - so glad you enjoyed! I also love adding a bit of humor to let the boys laugh. :-D Thanks!

[roxymissrose.livejournal.com]

Wow! Very erotic--the way John let Rodney manipulate him, and the reason Rodney gives for wanting to photograph him like that...good stuff!

Rodney made it clear how he felt about John's curiosity. "I said, 'Don't move'! How hard can that be?"

With a frustrated growl, John lowered his head, muttering under his breath, "Hard is the damn problem."

Hee! And that bit was very cute!

[danceswithgary]

I'd love to watch something like this myself - Rodney concentrating and John pliant under his hands. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks!

[helenkacan.livejournal.com]

I can't believe I never commented on this segment when I first read it. ::stops and slaps own hand:: There's something very drabblic (hee - I can make up form parameter meanings!) in the deliberate choice of words and pacing (and visceral oomph) that one normally doesn't get in something that is multiples of a hundred words.

Mmmmmmm.
And double Mmmmmmm for the visual reminders.

[danceswithgary]

It's drabblic.

Cool!

I love playing with visuals like this - glad you enjoyed. :-D

Thanks!